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CREATING SUSPENSE In Clip One, created by Jay Moussa-Mann, she talks about how to create suspense through film features and technique....
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Props Old oil barrels create an atmosphere of abandonment or lack of care taken in maintaining the area, rust signifies decay formed by ...
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Cross-media-convergence and synergy are used to promote media products to the extent that it may cause a film to be successful or a failure....
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Well done on an effective thriller opening sequence rough edit! It's looking great!
Now what you need to do is be really purposeful about each creative decision. Think about why you include certain transitions (mainly your cut to black screens) and whether they are effective or whether they detract and distract from the suspense that's meant to be building. You need some titles and to put some thought into how you display your Titles and credits. Your music can also be explored a bit more. Why not try a few different versions with different tracks and see how it differs? I would also re-think the length of the end of the scene with the car driving out. It is really long with no resolve. Perhaps shortening it could end on more of a suspenseful note?