Homework week 3
Brainstorm: Mentally
ill person
- · Contrasting colours (dark when he is alone/ bright when he interacts with others).
- · Packed city living in middle to higher class old English style houses packed together.
- · The character display multiple personality disorder and bipolar disorder.
- · Mirrors act as a gate way into the characters mind.
- · Doors represent options, how the story will progress (evil or good).
- · Duality of existence.
- · Blood represents chaos and entropy. Each time the main character kills he becomes mader believing he takes on a piece of their soul (personality).
Rationale (explanation for
what you're doing and why you're making the creative decisions - DETAILS) At
least 500 words:
The scene starts with a high angled wide shot that pans down
over a bright sunny day (warm colours are emphasised), the scene contains a
large amount of thriving greenery representing life flourishing in the outside
world. The scene starts with the song Life is but a dream (non-dietetic)
playing in the background with the sound of the breeze and birds chirping (dietetic).
The main character interacts with a older woman between the ages of 40 to 55 walking
on the on the opposite side of the street in his direction, they wave and smile
at each other in a neighbourly(friendly) fashion. there is foreshadowing in
this scene as their paths will collide again but rather in a different and
darker way.
The main character walks to his front door in a perspective shot
looking on at his average identical house, this represents though on the
outside he is average and seems normal his contents like the house is anything
but normal but rather filled with hidden horrors. He opens the door where the
camera fazes from perspective to an over the shoulder as the character, he walks
down the hall into his house stairs and three doors can be seen after entry.
The colour scheme changes from the bright warm colours to dark cold colours
showing a shift in atmosphere and mood.
The main character in an over the shoulder shot stops at a
mirror at the end of the hall showing signs of frustration and anger seemingly
out of nowhere , he punches the mirror in front of him fracturing it, all the
fractures reflecting his normal face except one which seems evil and twisted. This
introduces the darker monstrous side of the character. A sudden flash to a dark
room with no doors or light sources only a hunched-up man in a black hoodie covering
his face as he sways back and forth on the floor. this room represents the subconscious
of the character.
The figure stands up still not revealing hie face to the viewer
with a mid-shot from a high angle to build up tension, he faces a mirror broken
in two revealing a normal image of the character and the other side revealing
the evil twisted version. Mirrors represent the gate to the soul in the movie.
In the subconscious room each mirror contains a version of the character. The dark
version seems to say something, but it is not audible, however dark low non-dietetic
music players in the background. The screen begins to tilt with a ear non-dietetic
music playing as the subconscious room begins to distort.
A quick cut scene has the character waking up in his dark room
with a black out of what has just happened, this part is mid shot facing the
character at eye level. Blood can be seen in the corner of the shot , it then
focuses on the blood as the character sees it .suddenly the shot cuts to a high
angle and an upside view of the character which rotates till it is level again
,this is done while he stands up looking at his clothes splattered with blood.
When the shot cuts to an upside-down view of the character non-dietetic sound
starts to build tension. The character sees more blood in the shape of his footsteps
leading down the stairs down to the basement. When the shot of the character
stands at the top of the stairs is a high angle mid shot. The character is
looking down at the house then cutting to a low angle at the bottom of the
stairs looking up at him in a wide shot of him at the top of the stairs.
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ReplyDeleteOverall score: 33/40
ReplyDeleteRationale: 17/20
Storyboard: 9/10
Brainstorm: 7/10
- some great creativity here in coming up with a multi-layered narrative and complex character
- good evidence of understanding how the 4 technical elements create meaning, especially in the thriller genre
- effective use of symbolism / iconograhy such as blood and mirrors to speak to a deeper narrative within the movie world
- good detail in the rationale to really get your idea across
- storyboard is effective in informing the direction of the scene
- brainstorm has some good narrative conventions, would have been good to have a few more technical ideas presented on here too
- Please also turn your scanned documents to face the right way