Thursday, September 3, 2020

portfolio 3




 

2 comments:

  1. Hi Chris

    Overall Score: 13/20

    You have showed an understanding of the relationship between the music/ sound elements and the visual elements to create tension. Camera shot variety was interesting and the editing was, for the most part, creating continuity editing.

    A stronger beginning would have set up the narrative for the audience and allowed them to jump straight into the action and pending danger. Things like an establishing shot, dialogue, internal dialogue, narration, news flashes etc, all could have been used as ways of putting the audience in then picture for what is happening.

    The medical thriller genre was effective in relation to the current climate of what is happening in the world.

    Your group LOGO is missing which is a shame! Also to have opening titles of actors etc, would have been good to establish that it is a film opening.

    Overall, a fair effort.

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  2. Hi Chris

    Overall Score: 13/20

    You have showed an understanding of the relationship between the music/ sound elements and the visual elements to create tension. Camera shot variety was interesting and the editing was, for the most part, creating continuity editing.

    A stronger beginning would have set up the narrative for the audience and allowed them to jump straight into the action and pending danger. Things like an establishing shot, dialogue, internal dialogue, narration, news flashes etc, all could have been used as ways of putting the audience in then picture for what is happening.

    The medical thriller genre was effective in relation to the current climate of what is happening in the world.

    Your group LOGO is missing which is a shame! Also to have opening titles of actors etc, would have been good to establish that it is a film opening.

    Overall, a fair effort.

    ReplyDelete

CCR 1

 Question 1 How does your product USE or Challenge conventions? In my clip, I used the convention of darkness. Darkness is used to build sus...